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Nightmare

To Christmas


© Jynx


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Jack stormed out the door, practically splintering them as they slammed. For anyone who saw him storm out, he would have just been a tall, black and white blur. He slammed through the gates, making the corpse band jump, and the teenagers fall off the wall they were perched on.
"Whoa, hey Jack what's...." Areo began, but Jack was already gone.
"What was that all about?" Jynx asked, trying to keep from falling off the wall.
"Who knows," Bann shrugged, "Seems like everythings going wrong lately."
"Oh yeah," Areo exclaimed, "Like with the humans..." he trailed off, lost in his own thoughts.
"Yeah..." Jynx said, realizing they had lost him, "Hey were did the kids go?" She looked over to where Lock, Shock and Barrel had been playing a moment ago. The three thirteen year olds had begun sneaking after Jack, laughing mischieviously.
"Stop." Bann yelled after them angrily, "You three don't need to get into anymore trouble."
"Aren't you curious," Shock asked over her shoulder, somewhat annoyed, "He could be up to something?"
"It seems more like the other way around." Jynx said, giving the young witch a suprisingly frightening look.
"C'mon," Lock growled viciously, "We know you guys are courious." When the older kids just stared at them, the three just shrugged and ran off after the flustered Pumpkin King.
"Ohhhhh no," Bann said, noticing the strange expressions that had crept across his friends' faces. "Don't even think about it."
"Aren't you worried that they might get into trouble..." Areo smiled evily.
"Oh there's no might to it," Jynx grinned as well, "They will definetely get into trouble."
"We can't just let them get into trouble can we?" Areo jumped off the wall, followed by a now troubled looking Jynx. She may have liked adventure and things like that, but she was horribly timid when it came to actually doing something adventerous or exciting.
Bann sat for a moment and debated over whether or not to follow them. Why not, after all, they were just going to whatch Lock, Shock and Barrel......
He shrugged and lept off the wall after them, if anything, he could keep everyone out of trouble.
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Jack sighed and stared at the door that lead to Christmas. Everything looked fine from his end, maybe everything was fine and he would be able to get back to Sally and Jenna, and his mounds of work. He sighed again, maybe this distraction wasn't such a bad thing after all. With any luck this would be a matter that he could settle quickly and get back to his family as soon as he could.
All of his worries left him as soon as he landed in the soft snow on the hill overlooking Christmas Town. The smell of cookies filled the air and lights dance before his eye sockets. He smiled and listened for the familar sound of Christmas carols and other merriment, but it didn't come.
Instead, he was greeted by the terrified screams of elves from somewhere inside the town. "What," Jack gasped, running towards the source of the screams, the center of town. The sight that he saw was a frightening one, even for him. Elves running from horrible looking creatures, forgein to even Halloween Town. Gaint scorpions, Spiders, and strange mechanical monsters were attempting to take the little creatures to God knows where and the whole town was in a freenzy. And in the middle of it all was Sandy, fighting the creatures off the best he could.
"Jack!" he yelled, somehow still managing to sound jolly, "Glad you could make it."
"Mr. Claws!" Jack yelled whipping out his Soul Robber, "What's happening here?"
Sandy gave him a confused look and stated, "I was hoping you could tell me."
"I've never seen these creatures in my life!" Jack exclaimed, a little insulted that Sandy would think such a thing.
"Sorry son," he shrugged, throwing a candy cane and killing a rampaging spider, "They just seem a little, er, Halloweeny, you know."
Jack resisted the urge to ask Sandy were he was getting all his weapons from. "Well, these are nothing I have ever delt with before." He took out about three monsters with a sweep of his Soul Robber, thankfully, they were easy to get rid of.
I took about an hour, and both Sandy and Jack were exhausted, but they finally had diminished the bug and robot army down to just a few meger monsters.
"It's almost over." Jack gasped, relieved. Suddenly, the voice of a young girl could be heard over the sounds of battle.
"Daddy!"
Both Sandy and Jack spun around, acting on fatherly insitncs, to see a strange balck haired man holding red haired teenager by the arm.
"CARABELL!" Sandy yelled.
"She's your's?" Jack exclaimed, shocked.
"Hello boys," black haired human said, with a wicked smile, "It's about time we met."
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Ha...Cliffhanger!! It's kinda short, but I kinda think up the story as I go so it's gonna take me a while to really get going, that and it's late. Tell me what yall think and what I could improve on. I want to be a writer so I need all the help I can get.

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