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Kaylee: oogie boogie dumb guy let us go! Maya:if you don't le us go i think i will kill you! Oogie Boogie:is that so rag dolls? Kaylee+Maya:we are not rag dolls! Oogie Boogie;ha ha ha ha. rolls his dice. I hope your felling lucky you need it! Kaylee punches him. Oogie Boogie: hey you better watch it our you will really get it! Maya: oh i am "really" scared! Oogie Boogie:you should be because no one is going to save you ha ha ha ha. Lock Shock and Barrel started laghing. Lock:he is so not cool! Shock:we all know he's not! Barrel:i got a lolly stuck to my head! Shock pulls it off and starts licking it. Lock: that is gross! Lock grabs the lolly pop and starts licking it. Oogie SHUT UP!.......... Jack walks into the door of Maya's house. Jack: girls i am here to pick you up! Jack waits a few seconds then walks upstairs. Jack:girls where are you? Jack walks around the house then sees one of Lock Shock and Barrel's traps.Jack: oh no! Jack runs to Sally.Jack: Sally Maya and Kaylee got kidnaped by Lock, Shock and Barrel! Sally: oh no this is bad really bad! Jack: i am going to oogies lair and saving them! Sally: be careful! Jack runs out the door.Jack:runs to the tree house and jumps down oogie's tube.Jack: let them go now! Oogie Boogie: noooooooooooooo! you are not going to make me! Jack grabs his dice and throws them in the snake and spider stew. Oogie Boogie: i am still not leting you have them back! Oogie Boogie pushes a button and Jack falls in a dark hole. Good thing Jack has his soul robber or he would have been toast!...... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~that is it for this chapter

but there will be more to come! i hope you like it!
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