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Jack was hanging on when he spoted a platform.
He jumped on it.
Jack:why now?!?!?!?!!
Jack jumped through the traps and if he made on mistake ...well lets try not to think about that.
Oogie:Hey do you like snake and sipder stew?
Kaylee+Maya:SHUT UP WE WILL KILL YOU!
Oogie:i would like to see you try! ba ha ha.
Sally sneaked in.
Oogie: you would need luck rag-dolls!
Kaylee and Maya wanted to get him really badly.
Jack walked to the pit then saw light.
Jack:was this the exit or the trick of oogie boogie?
Jack had to go and see.
So he walked to the light thinking it might be a trap but i got to go.
Oogie was yelling mean things at them.
Sally came out.
Sally:leave my kids alone!
Oogie's eyes got wider.
Oogie:is that really the best you can do?
Sally:I HATE YOU!
Oogie pushed a button and she fell right by Jack.
Sally:so whats your plan?
Jack:i don't have one so i'm going to wing it!
Sally and Jack kept walking.
Kaylee and Maya both had a fake gold braslet.
They both used it to cut them selfs out.
Oogie:ha ha ha ha! did you really think you could stop me?
Oogie sent big bugs to get them.
Kaylee and Maya could not get away!
Then oogie was right there holding a tight grip on both of their arms.
They could not slip away because they could hardly move.
Oogie:good luck saving them Jack!
Jack and Sally made their way through the maze.
Jack:stop oogie you can't win!
Oogie:this time i will!
Oogie sent a lot of bugs to Jack and Sally.
Jack beat them all with his soul robber.
Oogie's eyes got wider once more.
Oogie through Kaylee and Maya on the hard ground.
They were circled by monsters.
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How will this end find out in the next few chapters! Hope you like it now!
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