Okay, this is my first attempt of submitting my writing on here.
not sure if its that good or not....
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Sally lokked out the window of her dark, dull room. This was the 5th..no...6th time she had been caught trying to sneak out of her house. She opened the window to hear screams of terror and a high, pirceing laugh. She looked around wondering who it had come from. Her eyes finally settled on a dark figure in the distance. Little did she know it was the pumpkin prince, Jack Skellington. All she knew is that she loved him, 2000X more than she could ever love Dr.Finklestein, her one and only guardia-
~INTERMISSION~
Sally: Hey RubynRags! Whatcha' doin'?
RNR: Uhhh. . .nothing???
Sally: Let me see what you're writing!
RNR: No, i don't think you should.
Sally: LET ME SEE!!!!
---I thought i told you to stay away from my diary.
RNR: Listen, these pepole reading this are trying to hear the rest of the story!!!
~INTERMISSION OVER~
So, Jack was practicing his scaring for when he was to become king. He had seen Sally look out of her window at her (from a pretty good distance of 3 miles) and wondered about her. She wasn't very pretty, with a ton of scars on her face, and she wasn't very nice, for he had seen her put posion into Dr.Finklestein's soup, and she wasnt very curvy either. But he had a certain felling about her. A certain-
~SECOND INTERMISSION~
Jack: Yo! RubynRags! 'Sup?
RNR: NOTHING! NOTHING! GET AWAY FROM MY COMPUTER!!!!! *hissss*
Jack:
Um. . . okay. But what are you doing with my journal?
RNR: *HISSSSSS*
Jack: Geez. . . fine. But don't be posting my story about my head lice on that www.nightmarebeforechristmas.net you go on.
RNR: Ummm. . . no! I would never do that!
Jack:
Then why do you have my love life printed all over your computer screen?
RNR: Well...I...uh...BACK TO THE STORY!!!
Jack: I dont think so.
RNR: Well, uh, folks that's all the time I have! Um. . . TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!
-To be continued
RNR: TOLD YOU!!!!
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