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Thanks for the great ideas by "stitches" and "wolfgirl25"!!! I love both of you guys! (in a friendly non-disgusting way!)
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When we left off, Sally spotted Jack, Jack spotted Sally, and rubynrags (me!) was hissing.
Now, not much after we left off, Sally had leaped out of her window for the first time. She was determed to meet Jack. She stumbled out to the graveyard....but Jack was nowhere to be found. She checked behind every tombstone, masoleum, and treehouse owned by 3 troublemakers, but she could not find Jack. " Ohhh..." she mumbled to herself as she sat on a near-by grave. " How could he like me? Me! With my ugly scars and my stupid hair!?!" She laid her face in her hands and started to bawl. After something, like, 20 minutes, she slowly got up from her grave. (not really HER grave but she was sitting on it and...um, yeah..) She had actcindentally wandered into a tree branch (not good at walking yet. This is so many years before the movie) and as she walked away, her theard from her leg started to come out! It was hooked on the branch, but Sally did not know this, not until her leg came completly off. She stumbled back and forth a couple of times, until she fell. But she did not hit the ground. Two thin arms, almost like twigs, caught her.
" Oh, thank you so much!" she said in a weary voice. " I can't imagane what would happen if--" She looked up. And there, holding her, was
Jack Skellington! She started to sputter, but no words came out.
" I see you had , ahem, a
good Fall." he said. Sure, it was a corney gag, but Sally had not ever heard such a beautiful voice in her entire life! She looked at him.
Oh man! she thought.
Look at him! His cute smile! His awsome clothes! *sigh* He's so cute, I don't even care if he's bald! She slowly arose from his arms, only to fall again.
" I belive this," Jack said as he held up her detatched leg. " Is yours."
Once again she started to sputter and sweat, but she finally started to nod. "Yes.." she squeaked.
" Well, um, yeah...here you go.' he said. Sally proped herself up against a tree and started to sew herself back together. As she did, she watched Jack. As a result, her leg was on backwards. She walked away, sad and torn that her first night with Jack had come to an end, but then Jack called after her, " Maybe soon we could get dinner together or something like that!!!" She looked back, tear in her eye, and said," I'd like that." Altough she said she "liked" it, she could not think of a better way to spend a night.
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So, hope anyone who reads this now loves it. I plan to continue with CHAPTER 4 soon. And thanks to two brilliant minds I could have done this without, stitches and wolfgirl25!!!! (You two are so going on my friends list! And if you two don't like how your ideas were put into this story, send me an e-mail or comment) Look out for Chapter #4!!!
-rubynrags
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