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Oogie's doorbell rang. " I have a doorbell?" He thought as he walked towards his secrret enterance door. The Benemoth answered. " Here's the pizza and suitcase you ordered."
" Wha--I didn't order anything!"
" Yes you did. You had a coupon for..." he took out a napkin reading "coupon". " 'One free Extra Extra Large Pizza and a free suitcase.' and you used it."
" Well.....I DO love pizza......and free suitcases.......okay." He snatched them from Benemoths hands and shut the door in his face. As he walked away, Zero floated out of the suitcase and unlocked the seceret door. Mayor and Jack sneaked inside. " okay..." Jack whispered over his shoulder."let's go find sally and bunny before oogie comes back. ok mayor...mayor?" The Mayor was over...eating the pizza. " Mayor!" Jack whisper yelled. " That stuff's made outta cardboard!"
" *crunch* It's good cardboard!" he said as he licked the cheese off. Jack ignored him. He heard Sally struggling in the other room...the one with Oogie. He heard a deep chuckle as he inched towards the open door.
" So, Ragdoll. Mr.Bone-Head couldn't make the deadline. Now, it's your turn to be DEAD.........line." Sally looked at him in disgust.
" Really, was that the best you could do? That was worse than your 'Double-Dead' remark last year."
" I thought it was cool. ahem....Well, any last words Rags..and Cottontail?"
" Yeah!" Jack spoke up. He came into the room. " Let them go!"
" Oh, right. I'm gonna listen to a dude in a pink bunny costume." he laughed. Sally sighed.
" Jack, he's got a point. Why'd your wear that?"
" Um.....that's besides the point! The main thing is that I'm here to take them back!"
" Not on my watch." Oogie stepped on a button and the Kings popped up. " Oh, have I mentioned I got an upgrade on all of my weapons?" He hit a button on the wall and the Kings leapt off of the cards. Swords swinging, they closed in on Jack. Jack jumped into the air, making the kings crash into each other and break.
" Doesn't look like they changed much." Jack said, falling back down. Oogie's eyes went wide.
" Well, uh...how 'bout some of this?!?" He pulled a switch and the robots who shot the guns crawled out of a pit. Bullets flying, Jack dodged every one.
After the robots only had a little amo left, Jack hid behind the platform Sally and Mr.Bunny were strapped onto. They shot their last bullets. The bullets broke the leather straps, setting Sally and Mr.Bunny free.
" Wow..." Oogie said to himself. " Did NOT see that coming."
Sally fell to the ground (hasn't been walking for the past few hours.) Oogie seized the moment and grabbed her. " Surrender," he said, grabbing her neck. " Or she dies..." Jack was confused.
" Surrender to What?" Oogie looked at him. " What is your plan even about?"
Oogie sighed. " If I have to explain it it isn't evil..." he muttered to himself. " Okay,
" Since you and Sally are together, that makes her the Pumpkin Queen."
Jack said, " Actually..."
" SILENCE! My plan is to kill you, marry Sally and become king of Halloween! Is that so hard to understand???? Now, we can do this the easy way and kill just you Jack..." He held out a remote control. " ...or we can kill both of you."
Sally spoke up. " Uh..your plan has one leetle prob--"
" SILENCE!" he pressed the button on the remote control and a hatch in the floor opened up. Smoke billowed out and a huge, mechanical robot dragon stepped out. " Now," he said again. " Easy or hard way?" Sally was overly annoyed.
" Just listen to me! You're making a mis--"
" Okay, hard way it is then." he pressed the button again. The dragon made a loud >POP< noise, then sparks flew out of it's neck. Then it just completely fell apart. " Once again, did NOT see that coming." Oogie said. "Um....this is kind of awkard. Uh.." Oogie took out a sword from nowhere and ran at Jack. Jack fought back with another sword coming out of nowhere (Things come out of nowhere alot lately

) So, they started sword fighting.
" Oogie!" Jack said, dodging Oogie's every move. " I've been trying to tell you something!"
" Oh.....yeah?" he said stabbing at Jack. "....what?!?!?"
"Sally.....and I.....aren't MARRIED!" Jack said, stabbing back. " If....you....marry her........you won't...become pumpkin king!" Oogie stopped for a brief second.
" Um.......wow......i really need to start thinking my plans through......waaiiiittttt......" he sung at Jack and held the sword in front of his face. " This is all a trick. Oh, you're good Jack, but not that good. Hey, ragdool! Come see the very last of your fiancee'....." He got ready to stab, but the Easter Bunny knocked him over. " Wha--?!?!" Mr.Bunny started biting him with all he had. A couple of minutes later, Oogie was almost torn to shreds. He stuppered. " J-j-j-j-jack.....was......what you just told me........true?"
" Uh-huh."
"................................................................crud.........." All of his bugs scuddled out beneath the green cloth and into the snake-and-spider stew.
" Well, that was weird." Jack said.
" Yup...."Sally sighed. She walked over to the bunny. " Um....thanks again for saving our lives. I promise Jack will never take over your holiday again. "
" Wait a second!" Jack yelled
" SHH! As, I was saying, we're all really sorry. I'd like to give you this as a token of our gratitude." She picked up the green cloth and handed it to him. " Thank you...." The easter bunny hopped out of the tunnel (the one santa went out of) Sally sighed.
" Wow....deja vu, huh?" Jack just stood there.
" Sally...." he turned to Sally. " I can't believe I did it again. I had promised you I wouldn't. Can you forgive me?" Sally kissed him on the cheek.
" I'll think about it." she laughed.
" Now, we have to go fix everything......"
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Oogie is so dumb.

Well, I'm almost finished. I hopw you guys liked it all! (the easter bunny is secretly violent , duh duh duhhhhhhhhh)
Aw, sweet moment at the end *blows nose* I wonder what happened to Benemoth and zero? I'm pretty sure the mayor's still eatin' pizza.
can't wait...
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